Write a letter to your local municipality about the difficulties with the dust bins in your street.
Dear, Sir/Madam
I am writing
this
letter against the issue of dustbin which we are facing since long back . Linking Words
Firstly
, I am describing the problem of Linking Words
garbage
collecting bins in the Anjurphata Use synonyms
area
.
Use synonyms
Secondly
, the Linking Words
area
consists of 200 apartments and 2 schools and one children's play Use synonyms
area
. So basically , the public trash barrel in our locality Use synonyms
are
around 13 which are not sufficient . Most of the Change the verb form
is
garbage
is dried but there is a shortage in the Use synonyms
area
. The collecting Use synonyms
garbage
van arrives once a week because Use synonyms
of
a huge gap Change preposition
apply
of
collecting the Change preposition
in
garbage
Use synonyms
is
Unnecessary verb
apply
also
creates a mess on the streets . The bins get filled to the top so individuals keep the waste beside the waste bins. So, the road and Linking Words
area
get messy Use synonyms
due to
the littering of wrappers , and carry bags and even the dogs snatch and spread it. Linking Words
For instance
, I request you Linking Words
to
place more trash Fix the infinitive
apply
can
at every place and at all apartments .
Fix the agreement mistake
cans
Thirdly
, Linking Words
This
will help us to live in a clean use Linking Words
area
. Gradually Use synonyms
this
will Linking Words
also
help to decrease the spread of germs and bacteria .
So there is Linking Words
an
humble request to look forward Change the article
a
on
Change preposition
to
letter
regarding the improvement in Anjurphata
Yours sincerely
HarshAdd an article
a letter
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite