Write a letter to your local municipality about the difficulties with the dust bins in your street.

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Dear, Sir/Madam I am writing
this
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letter against the issue of dustbin which we are facing since long back .
Firstly
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, I am describing the problem of
garbage
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collecting bins in the Anjurphata
area
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.
Secondly
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, the
area
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consists of 200 apartments and 2 schools and one children's play
area
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. So basically , the public trash barrel in our locality
are
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around 13 which are not sufficient . Most of the
garbage
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is dried but there is a shortage in the
area
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. The collecting
garbage
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van arrives once a week because
of
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a huge gap
of
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in
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collecting the
garbage
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is
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also
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creates a mess on the streets . The bins get filled to the top so individuals keep the waste beside the waste bins. So, the road and
area
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get messy
due to
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the littering of wrappers , and carry bags and even the dogs snatch and spread it.
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, I request you
to
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place more trash
can
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at every place and at all apartments .
Thirdly
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,
This
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will help us to live in a clean use
area
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. Gradually
this
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will
also
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help to decrease the spread of germs and bacteria . So there is
an
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humble request to look forward
on
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letter
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regarding the improvement in Anjurphata Yours sincerely Harsh
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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