Write a letter to your local municipality about the difficulties with the dust bins in your street.
Dear, Sir/Madam
I am writing
this
letter against the issue of dustbin which we are facing since long back . Firstly
, I am describing the problem of garbage
collecting bins in the Anjurphata area
.
Secondly
, the area
consists of 200 apartments and 2 schools and one children's play area
. So basically , the public trash barrel in our locality are
around 13 which are not sufficient . Most of the Change the verb form
is
garbage
is dried but there is a shortage in the area
. The collecting garbage
van arrives once a week because of
a huge gap Change preposition
apply
of
collecting the Change preposition
in
garbage
is
Unnecessary verb
apply
also
creates a mess on the streets . The bins get filled to the top so individuals keep the waste beside the waste bins. So, the road and area
get messy due to
the littering of wrappers , and carry bags and even the dogs snatch and spread it. For instance
, I request you to
place more trash Fix the infinitive
apply
can
at every place and at all apartments .
Fix the agreement mistake
cans
Thirdly
, This
will help us to live in a clean use area
. Gradually this
will also
help to decrease the spread of germs and bacteria .
So there is an
humble request to look forward Change the article
a
on
Change preposition
to
letter
regarding the improvement in Anjurphata
Yours sincerely
HarshAdd an article
a letter
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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