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Some believe that is the responsibility of people to take care of the environment. Others say it is the government that should take care of the environment. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

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The maintenance of our ecosystem is essential to protect life on earth. Some individuals believe that residents are responsible to take care of the
environment
,
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however
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 others think that it should be ensured by the country's Governance. The rubbish and toxic gasses are creating a bad impact on the
environment
 and
people
 should be held answerable for its cause.
People
 are not prioritizing and understanding the option of recycling and throwing their leftovers on the roads rather than in dustbins.
In addition
, industries are not taking safety measures to protect their air from dangerous exhaust gasses.
For Instance
, in Pakistan
people
 are still using old engines and their fumes are very hazardous to mankind
as well as
 to the
environment
.
Consequently
,
public
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have
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 overlooked the importance of the
environment
 to benefit and ease themselves.
On the other hand
, the lack of
Government
 attention has led towards the devastating effects of climate change. An Authority should establish departments and training to bring awareness to the minds of
people
.
Furthermore
, the recycling plant installation is an essential part to lower the heavy impact on the
environment
.
For instance
, In Pakistan
people
 are throwing their garbage on the roads as the
Government
 has made no policy or created awareness regarding its side effects in future.
As a result
, The
Government
 is filling landfills with garbage as
people
 are making more and more waste.
To conclude
, As the
Government
 and the residents have their own duties, in my opinion, in order to prevent nature from hazardous outcomes, both have to do efforts in their domain.
For instance
, In ,Karachi various bins have been installed, but
due to
 a lack of ,
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awareness they are thrown on the streets.
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