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Some believe that is the responsibility of people to take care of the environment. Others say it is the government that should take care of the environment. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

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The maintenance of our ecosystem is essential to protect life on earth. Some individuals believe that residents are responsible to take care of the
environment
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 others think that it should be ensured by the country's Governance. The rubbish and toxic gasses are creating a bad impact on the
environment
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 and
people
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 should be held answerable for its cause.
People
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 are not prioritizing and understanding the option of recycling and throwing their leftovers on the roads rather than in dustbins.
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, industries are not taking safety measures to protect their air from dangerous exhaust gasses.
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, in Pakistan
people
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 are still using old engines and their fumes are very hazardous to mankind
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 to the
environment
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have
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 overlooked the importance of the
environment
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 to benefit and ease themselves.
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, the lack of
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 attention has led towards the devastating effects of climate change. An Authority should establish departments and training to bring awareness to the minds of
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, the recycling plant installation is an essential part to lower the heavy impact on the
environment
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.
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, In Pakistan
people
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 are throwing their garbage on the roads as the
Government
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 has made no policy or created awareness regarding its side effects in future.
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, The
Government
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 is filling landfills with garbage as
people
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 are making more and more waste.
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, As the
Government
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 and the residents have their own duties, in my opinion, in order to prevent nature from hazardous outcomes, both have to do efforts in their domain.
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, In ,Karachi various bins have been installed, but
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awareness they are thrown on the streets.

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