Many countries spend a large amount of money on various researches.Some people believe that it is a waste Of money because there are many poor people who do not get enough money to buy their meals . To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Research
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is very essential these days. There
many
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problems in
this
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world that
requires
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a lot of
research
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to be solved.
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this
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research
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it
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apply
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requires money.
Research
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can
also
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solve problems like world hunger. The argument that Money
that is
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being on
research
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is a waste and
instead
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can be used to
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be spent
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spent
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on solving hunger is completely wrong. In
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essay, I will provide my reasons to
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • funding
  • benefits
  • poverty alleviation
  • economic growth
  • social welfare
  • government responsibility
  • public perception
  • prioritize
  • allocation
  • collaboration
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