The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two charts indicate the percentage of expenditures made online in four different retail areas in one specific country between 2003 and 2013.
Overall
, New Zealand experiences a marginal decrease in both travel and clothing areas, the contrary being true in the case of film and books sales, showing a significant climb over the latest presented year.
To begin
, an evident change is witnessed in the entertainment field (film/music), which climbs up by 12 per
cent
throughout the period, consisting of 33 per
cent
.
Similarly
, book shopping rates increase,
although
not noticeably from 19 per
cent
in 2003 to 22% in 2013.
In contrast
, travelling rates show a dramatic drop, with the highest point in 2003 (36%) receding to 29 per
cent
in the latest period. The same situation is experienced by the clothes buyers, accounting for 24 per
cent
in the first period and falling by one-third in the
last
momentum.
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