The following two pie charts show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995.

The following two pie charts show the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995.
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A glance at the pie charts provided reveals some information approximately the fame of various leisure activities in Europe in 1985 and in 1995
according to
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a survey.
Overall
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, it is apparent that in both
years
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, watching TV was the most popular
activity
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.
Moreover
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, one of the main activities consist of playing computer games in 1995
whereas
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in
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the 10 past
years
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,
this
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kind of
activity
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did not exist. Even though the most famous
activity
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in both
years
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embodies watching movies, the percentage of doing
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activity
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declined by 2%. In the 10 following
years
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in comparison with 1985, talking with family dropped by 11%,
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talking with friends increased by 5%. European adults preferred to decline to eat out during
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period between 1985 and 1995.
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, playing computer games is a key role in the life of people who lived in Europe in 1995 because just under a third of the pie chart contains
this
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kind of leisure
activity
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, activity with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steadily rise/drop
  • surge in popularity
  • decline/fall in interest
  • relative popularity
  • emerging trends
  • technological advancements
  • social changes
  • shift in preferences
  • popularity surge
  • dominant activity
  • market demand
  • consumer behavior
  • leisure industry
  • outdoor/indoor activities
  • decade comparison
  • survey results
  • preference shift
  • entertainment sector
  • sports and recreation
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