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The given bar chart illustrates information about the marital status of
women
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and men in
percentage
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percentages
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starting from 0 to 50.
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,it is vivid that, the largest indicator is occupied by married
women
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, which is equal to forty
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percent
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per cent
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of all taken,
while
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the lowest
Iindicator
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indicator
is occupied by a widow male and female. Turning to more detailed information,one of the largest
number
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made up
by
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40 per cent it's married people, at that time when the number of lonely people equal 30
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percent
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per cent
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of
female
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females
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and about 25% male. As regards other statistics, there
is
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divorced and widowed families. Out of the total percentage, the percentage of families with a dissolved marriage reached twenty
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percent
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per cent
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of men and 10 less than
women
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.
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, men who are left without their
spouse
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spouses
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occupy the lowest number.
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,
women
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who are
live
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without their spouse made up about 10
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percent
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.
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