The use of social media is replacing face to face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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use
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of social
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is replacing
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face to
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face
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interaction among many
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in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? Nowadays, many
people
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prefer social
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instead
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of
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interaction. The main advantages of social
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are connecting
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around the world and making
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it easier
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to
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to help each other.
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, social
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also
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has
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disadvantages, and these are that social
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can isolate
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from the real world and disturb
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them from
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studying. Social
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can help relatives to talk with each other, even when they are in different corners of the world.
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, when
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needs to go abroad he can talk with his family when he misses them.
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, social
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can help
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to help each other in tragic circumstances.
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, social
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can help to collect donations, to help
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,
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accidently
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accidentally
got into disasters, as
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was with Turkey after
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the earthquake
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.
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,
people
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who frequently
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social
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can be isolated, and do not even know about
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.
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,
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who
use
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social
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so often, can even forget about
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-to-
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interaction and just sit at home without any wish to go out.
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, is that social
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disturbs teenagers from studying.
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teenagers do not even track
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the time
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, that they spend on social
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. Let us say, that many teenagers make a decision to spend a little time on social
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, but
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they do not notice, that they spent
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it whole day. In the end, I think that if we control
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, who
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social
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and the time they spend on it, the advantages of social
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can outweigh the disadvantages.
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