Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, many world
courses
are available in universities which confuses students
. Some people
argue students
take the courses
whatever they like while
, others argue only they choose their subjects which is benificial
in Correct your spelling
beneficial
future
, such
as those related to science and technology
. I agree with the first opinion. In this
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will go through, Change the capitalization
I
while
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how
students
who choose science and technology
subjects will earn more money in future
, as well as
students
who choose their favourite subject are achive
many things in Correct your spelling
achieve
archive
future
.
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a student
the student
student
who Fix the agreement mistake
Students
study
demanding Change the verb form
studies
courses
will earn more money in future
. BecauseAdd an article
the
a
in
moving too fast science and Correct your spelling
is
technology
advancement is growing too fast Replace the word
technological
than
we think. Replace the word
then
MNC
,s Correct your spelling
MNCs
needs
skilled employees Correct subject-verb agreement
need
those
who already had Correct determiner usage
apply
a
good knowledge Correct article usage
apply
in
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of
technology
so they paid more.For example
, In india
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India
average
IT Correct article usage
the average
empoyee
salary is three times more than other field workers. Correct your spelling
employee
For
this
reason
parents push their children to choose Add a comma
,reason
courses
which is
useful in Correct subject-verb agreement
are
future
.
However
, apart from the salary people
who love their job will acheive
more in their carrier. I agree with Correct your spelling
achieve
this
opinion. because persons
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people
puts
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put
lot
of effort and Add an article
a lot
hardwork
only if they liked which gives lots of Correct your spelling
hard work
achivements
and Correct your spelling
achievements
name
in Correct article usage
a name
ther
carrier, Correct your spelling
the
their
for example
, one of the famous director in Tamilnadu, vijay
who directs the film "Change the capitalization
Vijay
uriyadi
" Correct your spelling
teriyaki
he
resining their IT job and enter into the film industry and now he is Correct pronoun usage
apply
successfull
in their carrier. Correct your spelling
successful
Likewise
, its
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it
also
gives peace and happy life. If people
really enjoy their jobs, they easily face the challenges and no
need to wait for the weekends because they Add a missing verb
have no
enjoys
every single day in these jobs. Change the verb form
enjoy
For instance
, research conducted by harward
university, Correct your spelling
Harvard
Harward
people
will live long when they do their job without stress.
In conclusion, earning money is important to lead a life but also
passionated jobs are more important than that.Submitted by madhavansubase on
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