Some people argue that girls and boys should be educated separately, while others think that it is more advantageous for children to study at the same school. What is your opinion?
"For some people, it is more advantageous for
children
to study at the same school
, while
for others, girls
and boys
should be educated separately. Everybody is free to give their opinion. Of course, there are pros and cons to the two options.
In a same-gender
school
, students would be more disciplined and focused only on their learning. When they are studying with the same gender
, there wouldn't be any distractions, like we know the first love starts in the early years of the person and usually
that happens in Add a comma
,usually
school
. However
, in my opinion, it is not always better to isolate children
from the opposite gender
. Therefore
, I think it is a better idea for them to study in a school
with both girls
and boys
. In this
way, they will be well-informed about their surroundings. Young people won't be so isolated in traditional schools like in same-gender
schools. Also
, girls
and boys
are completely different, and every gender
can take some knowledge from the opposite. They can brainstorm ideas better, while
girls
think with one part of the brain and boys
with the other. The world is so colorful
, and I think that it is really important to give our Change the spelling
colourful
children
the chance to explore it, meet more people, and get to know the opposite gender
.
In conclusion, for me, separate education has some pros, but traditional schools are more advantageous and give children
the chance to explore the world more freely."Submitted by borqnaatanasova94 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
