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Industrial area in the town of norbiton andd planned future development of the site

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The following maps illustrate the blueprint of an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and the future development plans in that area.
Overall
 the diagram shows the planned infrastructure
that is
 going to be built in the future, the industrial area is going to be converted into a residential town with schools, playgrounds, shops, apartments, and a medical centre. In the first picture, we can see that there is farmland in the north which is separated from the factories by a river. The complex consists of a roundabout connected to two paths, one of which goes to the east and the other to the south. the circle is surrounded by eight factories. In the future development ,plan a bridge is built on the river which connects the main residential complex to the farmland. There are now 2 intersections one of which is bigger and connects to 4 different roads. To the East ,side there is a school and a playground with few residential buildings, to the west are the shops and 3 living areas and the medical centre is located to the south of the map. The smaller intersection leads to 2 roads one of them leads to the East direction and the other to the West.
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