The diagram below shows the production of olive oil.
The pictorial diagram gives information about the stages which are involved in the process of producing olive oil.
Overall
, it is clear that
there are 7 complex subsequent stages in this
process, starting with picking olive fruits and finishing with storage and sale.
The diagram begins when necessary olive fruits are picked by people. Next,
the process commences with rinsing, which means those fruits are cleared with cold water in
the purpose of not harming them. After that, non-ready Change preposition
for
products
transferred
to the next stage by belt. The next thing to do is Add a missing verb
are transferred
smashing
which separated Wrong verb form
smash
products
to
olive Change preposition
into
paste
and olive stones. Following
this
, olive
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the olive
paste
is bagged to
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into
the
bags with holes.
Once Correct article usage
apply
olive
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the olive
paste
has been bagged, it continues with pressing. Afterwards, olive
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the olive
paste
is separated to
two Change preposition
into
products
including oil and water. Then
, they are distributed to the markets. And the final stage involves buying ready products
by
customers in order to eat them.Change preposition
for
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