You have seen an advertisement in Australian magazines for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child write a letter # Explain why you would like this # Give detail of why you are a suitable person to employ # Say how would you spend your free time while you are in Australia
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you with regards
about
an advertisement Change preposition
to
to
looking after your six-year child.
First and foremost, I am Change preposition
for
an
living in Change the article
apply
The
Park Avenue, Sydney near your home. I Correct article usage
apply
done
a course in childcare Add the auxiliary verb
did
have done
last
year. Main
reason behind my interest is that I am looking for Add an article
The main
job
because Add an article
a job
previous
family moved Change the article
the previous
in
Change preposition
to
other state
Change the wording
another state
other states
due
to that I have to leave that Correct word choice
and due
work
.
Moving on, I find me
myself suitable for Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
work
because I also
did training in this
field also
have work
experience. I know how to behave with children and about their diet. I had gain this
knowledge through 3 year
course. Add a hyphen
3-year
Moreover
, I also
have Add an article
a reference
reference
from Fix the agreement mistake
references
previous
family.
Correct pronoun usage
my previous
Finally
, whenever I get free time during the weekends at that time i
went to Change the capitalization
I
childcare
centre situated in the centre of the city and spent time with Correct article usage
the childcare
children
. Well, I found Correct article usage
the children
this
work
very interesting, if you find me suitable for this
work
and required any further
information please contact me. My email id is [email protected].
I am looking forward to hearing from you .
Yours sincerely,
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
