The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts demonstrate the
age
of Yemen
and Italy citizens in 2000 and 50-year forecasts as a percentage.
In 2000 in Yemen
youngsters occupied half of the pie chart, while
in Italy they hold only 14.3 per cent. Yemenis, whose age
is 15-59 hold approximately half of the chart (46.3%) , though in Italy middle-aged age
people
were the overwhelming majority of the population
(61.6). The smallest age
group
in Yemen
was older people
it
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apply
holds
only 3.6%, but in Wrong verb form
holding
Italy
it contains almost a quarter of the Add a comma
,Italy
population
.
To projections, middle-aged people
will contain the majority of the population
in Yemen
. The percentage of young Yemenis will decrease by 13 per cent and the oldest group
will have a tiny growth of 2%.
In Italy can be seen another trend. The number of older people
will be doubled. The percentage of the population
of people
aged 15-59 will decrease by a quarter. And the young-ones population
will have a slight decline.
In conclusion, there will be an increase in middle-aged people
in Yemen
, while
in Italy the opposite tendency can be seen. The smallest group
in Yemen
will continue to be the smallest , but in Italy
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,Italy
this
group
will double. The group
, which was the largest in Yemen
in 2000 ,predictably, will decline by 13% in 2050.Submitted by sashakameka on
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