The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the percentages of
paper
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and
cardboard
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, glass containers, aluminium cans and plastics that were recycled in an unspecified country between 1982 and 2010.
Overall
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, when compared to 1982, the total
percentage
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of recycling increased
however
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the efficiency of processing one material has fallen over the years: and
this
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is
paper
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recycling.
While
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the proportion of recycled aluminium cans and plastics was growing,
paper
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and
cardboard
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and glass containers had some fluctuations until 1994.
Paper
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and
cardboard
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recycling had seen fluctuations in the beginning- the
percentage
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rose to 70 in 1986, but fell sharply to the initial stage in 1990,
then
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increased again in 1994 and peaked at 80 per cent,
nevertheless
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, in subsequent years the indicator steadily dropped to reach 70% in 2010.
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faced with difficulties at the beginning , the glass container recycling
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on the contrary
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began to increase and in 2010 reached 60 per cent. The
percentage
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of recycled aluminium cans increased from just 5% in 1983 to 45% in 2010. What's more Plastic recycling increased from less than 5% to 9% in 2010.
As a result
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, we notice that in general , the recycling of all types of material has increased , except
paper
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and
cardboard
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.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words paper, cardboard, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • recycled
  • materials
  • increased
  • paper and cardboard
  • plastic
  • glass
  • metal
  • significant increase
  • relatively stable
  • fluctuating
  • period
  • starting
  • reaching
  • gradually increasing
  • remained low
  • experienced
  • showed
  • greatest
  • proportion
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