Nhat: Some People think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention, while others believe that it is the responsibility of the individual to protect themselves. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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It is believed that competent authorities should be liable to prevent
crime
,
whereas
other groups of people think that
crime
prevention responsibility belongs to the individual obligation aspect, which means each citizen needs to protect themselves. As far as I’m concerned, both the government and the individual have awareness of deterring
crime
in our society. On the one hand, the government plays a crucial role in our administrative system which makes society remain stable and
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in order. Competent authorities have the
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to enact the laws, acts
as well as
regulations to provide a mechanism to adjust the individual’s conduct
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and punish certain
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in general based on humanism.
Therefore
, citizens need to obey the laws to have a better and more secure community.
For example
, torture is regarded as a separate and independent
crime
. In case, a citizen commits
this
crime
or has criminal
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, he shall suffer from punishment in accordance with the law
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or official sentence.
Moreover
, there are
also
execution mechanisms
such
as
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to strictly monitor
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compliance of citizens.
On the other hand
, each person should raise awareness and be cautious of their safety because executing authority personnel cannot show up to protect them all the time. Taking thefts as an example, people can be the victims because of their negligence and carelessness because there is no presence of security guards or police
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24/7.
Hence
, the responsibility directly belongs to the owners to watch out for their goods and products
as well as
their belongings. In conclusion, the authority shall be responsible for protecting its people from criminal activities;
however
, the role of each individual in safety
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should not be ignored.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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