some people think physical activity should be added as a part of the school curriculum, while others say it is not necessary. discuss both views and give your opinion
Being healthy is not just an
assert
to their families but Correct your spelling
asset
also
for
their nation. Several Change preposition
to
individual
Change to a plural noun
individuals
reckon
that physical movement Change the verb form
reckons
have
to be Change the verb form
has
as
a part of schooling, Change preposition
apply
while
the
others appeal that it is not mandatory. In my opinion, Correct article usage
apply
i
support Change the capitalization
I
for
the former group.Change preposition
apply
this
essay will discuss about
the suggestions of both groups and will provide a logical conclusion.
There are several benefits of adding physical activity Remove the preposition
apply
in
Change preposition
to
curriculum
. Primarily, education is only for the development of our knowledge. Students with only wisdom are not going to be stronger in Add an article
the curriculum
their
future. They should do something Change the word
the
additionally
to be healthy. For example
, a
research in India shows that Remove the article
apply
majority
of the Correct article usage
the majority
children's
who are suffering from illness Change noun form
children
belongs
to the Correct subject-verb agreement
belong
top ranking
group. Add a hyphen
top-ranking
In addition
to that, apart from acquiring skills in theoretical
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the theoretical
aspect
, Fix the agreement mistake
aspects
Add an article
the teacher
a teacher
teacher
should indulge students in doing some sort of outdoor activities Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
such
as running, jogging
. Correct word choice
or jogging
Therefore
, by following
this
they can able to be more active in every activities
.
Change to a singular noun
activity
However
, there are some points that making
it Change the form of the verb
make
is
not necessary. Unnecessary verb
apply
Firstly
, it will provoke the
attention deficit hyperactive disorder, a psychological condition that Correct article usage
apply
affect
mainly the toddlers which in turn Change the verb form
affects
make
them aggressive. perhaps, it may harmful Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
for
other participants. Change preposition
to
Furthermore
, some learners
Change noun form
learner's
learners'
shoulder
need some rest, Fix the agreement mistake
shoulders
kind
of tad nap Correct article usage
a kind
inorder
to regain their stamina. A child after energetic play cannot focus Correct your spelling
in order
in
what the teacher teaching. In some cases, it Change preposition
on
Add a missing verb
is quit
quit
different that the student Correct your spelling
quite
get
entangled with the situation they had and Change the verb form
gets
keep
on curious towards Correct subject-verb agreement
keeps
in
it which can dull their performance in studies. Change preposition
apply
Hence
, they should be considered when give
them Change the verb form
giving
a
time for play.
In a nutshell, Correct article usage
apply
although
there are some factors affect
Correct pronoun usage
that affect
the
child play, it is mandatory Correct article usage
apply
to
them to have a break. Change preposition
for
This
kind of break is for enhance
their concentration, thinking, Change the verb form
enhancing
alertness
and Correct word choice
and alertness
also
to improve
their health.Change the verb form
improves
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