In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

There is now a need for new
houses
in many places, but the fact is that the available space is mostly in the
countryside
. Some people don’t see
this
as a problem, but others say that the
countryside
should be protected and nothing should be built there. Today we will look at both of these opinions and talk about them, and I will
also
share my opinion.
To begin
with, denying that people need more and more
houses
is pointless. And it seems to be a problem that can be solved, we just have to build them in the
countryside
. And indeed, in that
case
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there would be even more space for people. Civilisation is not standing still, it’s moving forward. But still, personally, I am more inclined to the opinion that the
countryside
should be protected. Every year, as I said earlier, civilization moves forward. But it’s not good for nature and the environment. The only
places
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where nature is still in a more or less normal state is the
countryside
. The important thing is that during the construction process itself, there will definitely be emissions of all sorts of gases and waste. And even if we build new
houses
there, we will
also
have to build roads and other infrastructure.
Thus
, the same
countryside
will gradually turn into new towns.
This
will cause even more damage to the environment.
To sum up
, I think we need to protect nature and the
countryside
. Anyway, whatever the problem with the lack of
houses
, it is not a reason to destroy
environment
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