The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of experts in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of experts in 2016 compared with 2015.
The following chart illustrates the value of exports in various categories and the table demonstrates the percentage change in each category of experts between 2015 and 2016 in one country.
Overall
, all export earnings have increased except for gems and jewellery which has reduced in 2016. In 2015 and 2016, the maximum export earnings are in order petroleum
products
and
engineered
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engineering
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goods from 61
billion
to 63
billion
and 58
billion
to 61
billion
. The second
place
is gems and jewellery which has reduced from 48
billion
to 41
billion
. The third
place
is agriculture
products
which have steadily slightly increased from 31
billion
to 32
billion
. The
last
place
is textiles which have sharply increased from 25
billion
to 32
billion
. The maximum percentage change in value is textiles by 15.24%. The second
place
is engineered goods by 8.5%. The third
place
is gems and jewellery by minus 5.18% which means they have reduced. the fourth
place
is petroleum
products
by
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at
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3% and the
last
one is agriculture
products
by
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at
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0.8%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
Vocabulary: Replace the words products, billion, place with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 3 times.
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