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Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?

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It is argued that possessing a lot of
money
 is the most successful way to be happy.
Money
 can fulfil the materialistic needs of an individual who seeks elation from
such
 accomplishments. Financial independence is not the only key to happiness. There are other ways as well
and
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as
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 simple everyday
things
 like enjoying time with family or helping
people
 in need
such
 as homeless children. On the one hand,
people
 who are financially sound could easily fulfil the materialistic needs and desires of their life which in return gives them a sense of satisfaction. Compared to
middle class
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middle-class
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people
, the affluent sections of society can easily satisfy their materialistic needs and wants.
This
 includes buying high-end cars, travelling to exotic locations or wearing expensive brands.
Further
, the rich have access to the best
health-care
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healthcare
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 treatments that the common man does not have access to.
Consecuently
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Consequently
,
money
 provides access to almost everything that can be purchased.
On the other hand
,
in addition
 to material wants, an individual can seek happiness from various other
things
. Health is most critical, if you aren’t healthy, you cannot be happy no matter how much
money
 you have. It is equally critical to have a loving and understanding family, sharing the dining table with family after a tiring day at the office. Dining with loved ones eliminates stress and worries.
Secondly
, helping
poor
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the poor
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 and needy could
also
 give achievement.
For example
, charity
to
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for
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 children who need medical help may be the most effective way to embrace elation.
Subsequently
, there are some
things
 that are priceless and cannot be bought with
money
. These
things
 include health, the opportunity to
spendquality
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spend quality
 time with family or financial aid to poor
people
. In conclusion, a large amount of
money
 may make
people
 happy as it offers material enjoyment.
Nevertheless
, spending time with close friends and helping the poor can
also
 be a source of joy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Financial security
  • Basic needs
  • Comfort
  • Luxury
  • Freedom
  • Altruistic
  • Philanthropy
  • Nurturing relationships
  • Fulfillment
  • Sense of accomplishment
  • Physical well-being
  • Spiritual beliefs
  • Community involvement
  • Gratitude
  • Mindfulness
  • Simple pleasures
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