Write a letter to a friend about an item you borrowed last week, that accidentally got damaged. In your letter – Describe the item. – What was the damage? – What do you intend to do to rectify the problem?
Dear Jenish,
I hope you are doing well. I wanted to tell you about an item which I was taken from your home
last
week. I am sorry to tell you that this
was damaged by my cousin
accidentally.
Firstly
, as you are not available last
week, I would like to describe an item which I borrowed from your house with your parent's permission. I took a video
game
to my home because my cousins visited my house last
Sunday. They want to play video
games with me so I decided to purchase a new one. But at the time, I remember those past days, when we were playing the same video
games, so I visited your house and borrowed it.
Secondly
, I would like to describe an incident where it was damaged by my cousin
. We just played it in the morning and suddenly my cousin
stands up to drink water and the remote of the video
game
was fallen into the ground with the video
game
unit. Therefore
, there was a crack in the remote as well as
that unit. Again, I would say it became due to
accidentally. I have very sorry about that.
Lastly
, I will bring it with me when I go to my company and if it is reparable by the shop's person then
I do it ,otherwise
I replace it with a new Add a comma
,otherwise
video
game
and give it to you.
Once again, I am sorry on behalf of my cousin
. I hope you understand the situation. Hope to hear from you soon. Thank you for your time. See you soon.
Warmest regards,
Milav
Correct your spelling
Milan
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite