The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

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It is thought some people,
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day there will be a single
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– English, which is now widely spoken in the world. Having
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language
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have its own merits and demerits.
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evident benefit of having a
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is that it would be easier to communicate with
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community, understand them; to get connected and emotions. It would be easier to learn, and share ideas, in a single
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. Another plus point of all speaking the same
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is that world trade would flourish as there would not be a
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barrier,
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healthy global economy would be achieved.
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the increment in international trade, there would not require to learn
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language
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that is
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happening now with people with dissimilar
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language
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, Nepalese labourers have to learn
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and pass the
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test; only
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get
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in Korea.
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kind of barrier would no longer be prevalent.
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having positive benefits, there would be, obviously, demerits of
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as well.
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, unique cultures, belief
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, and values that now the people and their society holds, would be buried
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their native languages’ graves. Though there
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aid
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global trade, there would be many countries that would
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severe financial
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as tourism would be their major source of national income
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as Nepal.
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there would be no point for tourists in visiting
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place that
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no unique culture or
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the same as they would already have.
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, the world would lose its diversity which is
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quite good. In conclusion, though there would be merits of having
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universal
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, several drawbacks would equally be widespread.
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, the community with the original
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, and
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should be preserved so that the upcoming generation could get benefit from it and could get acquainted with their own values.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Prominent
  • Contribute
  • Global
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Communication
  • Understanding
  • Ease
  • Business
  • Trade
  • Cultural exchange
  • Unity
  • Access
  • Information
  • Simplify
  • Travel
  • Tourism
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