The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
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The two maps compare Norbiton industrial area now and planned future development.
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, there are changes in future of Norbiton town from an industrial region to a residential zone. Regarding the industrial territory now, there are some factories in the east of a roundabout. These factories are to be replaced by a school on the edge of a road, a playground and two houses on the north of the main road, and a home and a medical centre in the south of the street. Moving to the north of the roundabout, in the present, a factory is located there. In the future, the factory will be displaced by a condominium and a main pathway from the roundabout to farmland through a river.
At the end
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of
this
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pathway, a mansion will be constructed.
In Addition
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, a route and two dwellings will be constructed to substitute a residence located northwest of the roundabout. In the southwest of the roundabout, a dwelling stands there, and
this
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condo will be supplanted by shops.
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, a small roundabout will be built to the south of the main roundabout.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • manufacturing
  • facilities
  • transition
  • planning
  • commercial
  • residential
  • renovation
  • urban planning
  • sustainability
  • environmental impact
  • local economy
  • rejuvenation
  • construction
  • modernization
  • accessibility
  • demolition
  • gentrification
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