The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given bar chart displays what percentage of

people

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living either in Africa, Asia, Europe, Latin

America

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/Caribbean, North

America

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, or Oceania in 1950 and 2007 lived in urban areas of these continents. The chart

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includes a forecast of the percentages that will live there in 2050.

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, it can be seen that every continent fraction experienced and would be likely to experience an increase. The biggest rise took place in Latin

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/ Caribbean,

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the smallest one was in Oceania. Regarding the changes from 1950 and 200, Asia and Africa had really similar and low percentages, going from around 15 in 1950 to approximately 40 in 2007, more than doubling,

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Europe

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experienced a similar percentage increase to theirs,

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as an approximately 20% expand of urban

people

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. The greatest growth, as previously mentioned, was in Latin

America

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/Caribbean, almost doubling its fraction with a 34% increase. About the prevision, Africa is supposed to double its proportion of

people

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living in the city and just followed by Asia's identical supposed growth of 25%. Meanwhile, the other continents would be likely to gain around 10% of

people

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moving there

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