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The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment.

The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment.
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Most consumer
goods
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 go through a series of stages before they emerge as finished products ready for sale. Raw materials and manufactured components comprise the initial physical input in the manufacturing process. Once obtained, these are stored for later assembly. But assembly first depends upon the
production
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 planning
stage
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, where it is decided how and in what quantities the stored materials will be processed to create sufficient quantities of finished
goods
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. The
production
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 planning
stage
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 itself follows the requirements of the
goods
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'
design
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stage
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 that proceeds from extensive
research
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. After assembly, the products are inspected and tested to maintain quality control l Those units that pass the inspection and testing stages are
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 packaged, despatched and offered for sale in retail outlets. The level of sales, which is the endpoint of the manufacturing process, helps determine
production
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 planning. A
product
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's
design
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 is not only the result of
product
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research
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,
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 but is
also
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 influenced by testing and market
research
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. If the testing
stage
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 (after assembly and inspection) reveals unacceptable problems in the finished
product
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,
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 adjustments will have to be made to the
product
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's
design
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.
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, market
research
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, which examines the extent and nature of the demand for products, has the role of guiding
product
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design
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 to suit consumer demands which may change with time. Market
research
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,
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 influenced by
product
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 sales,
also
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 serves to foster future sales by devising suitable advertising for the
goods
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.
Thus
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 the reality of consumer
goods
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 manufacturing goes well beyond a simple linear
production
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 process.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer goods manufacturing
  • stages
  • diagram
  • information feedback
  • adjustment
  • raw material extraction
  • processing
  • component manufacturing
  • assembly
  • packaging
  • overview
  • feedback loop
  • summarize
  • main points
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