Some people think that man and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The past few decades have witnessed the prevalence of taking more roles in society by
women
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.
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, there
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ongoing debates on whether
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just have
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the ability
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to do some particular jobs and others are only by
women
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. To the best of my knowledge, completed works do not depend on gender,
men
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or
women
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can take part in any
jobs
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job
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. In the modern world,
women
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go to school and get as high
education
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an education
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as
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. That means that all residents have knowledge, understanding and ability to be able to take responsible
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job they want to do.
This
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is obvious when looking at
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example that more and more
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become
to
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pilots and firefighters which are
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the kind
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kind
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kinds
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of occupation people suppose to be just for
men
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. In school, boys are taught about gender and employment.
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, they will not get hesitate to choose
art work
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or fashion work when they grow up
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as fashionista, model,
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or painter
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,… In conclusion, there is no job which is just only property for
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or
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. Everyone can learn, practice, and develop themselves to
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be suitable
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for no matter position they love to be
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in.
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