The graph below shows the amounts spent on cloths on the internet in the USA and japan between 1999 and 2003

The graph below shows the amounts spent on cloths on the internet in the USA and japan between 1999 and 2003
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the amounts spent on cloths on the internet in the USA and japan between 1999 and 2003
The line graph presents the costs of online clothing shopping in two countries, the United State and Japan, from 1999 to 2003.
Overall
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, there was increased spending on online shopping for clothing for both countries over the reporting period. Even though the
Japanese
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obviously spent more than Americans on purchasing clothing in 1999, they ended at the same level in 2003. Looking at the details, in 1999, the
Japanese
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bought more clothing online than Americans, accounting for 10
million
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.
This
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figure increased steadily in 2000 with roughly 12
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Japanese
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purchasing clothing online.
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, there was a significant drop in online shopping in the next year, with only around 8
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people buying clothing online. It was until 2002, a dramatic rise was experienced with just under 20
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Japanese
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purchasing clothing online and ending at 20
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. American market followed a similar trend. It began at 5
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in 1999 and went up to 10
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in 2000, which doubled the money that the
Japanese
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spent.
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, a remarkable decline of 7
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was witnessed in 2001 and a substantial increase of 20
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was seen in 2002, just slightly above the
Japanese
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, and ended at the same level in 2003.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words japanese, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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