Parents should encourage children to spend less time studying and more time doing physical activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some parents are motivating their offspring to invest time more in playing rather than academics. Yet, there remains a contentious debate as to whether can

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phenomenon be a beneficial step or a destructive scenario. I partially disagree with

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topic and will propound my accordance with credible examples. On the one hand, physical movement is imperative in order to have a healthy lifestyle. Presently, children are preparing to play indoor games in

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technology-filled world rather than older games

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as full of exercise activities running, long jumping, catching and so on.

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playing the kids will feel relaxed

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refresh their mind,

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help to focus on their studies.

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playing the brain gets refreshed and the neuron activities improve to do better

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studying new topics.

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, the significance of education is indispensable because it helps to create a better future. The caregiver and guardian believe that

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learning helps their juvenile to get a secure job offer, even if it improves lifestyle.

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,when pursuing a degree each individual learns life skills as

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communication skills, presentation, time management skills, etc ...

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the United Nations' economic level increased dramatically because the people's literacy ratio rate improved. As a way of conclusion,

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paying attention to health is crucial, parents cannot ignore the importance of education and in no , since they can make it the second priority.

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me, caregivers should follow a balanced approach to make them understand the criticality of both aspects for mental and physical development.