Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holidays and beyond work hours. Many people say that this is a positive development while others say that this is a negative development. Discuss both the viewpoints and give your opinion.

These days,
companies
would like to be able to
contact
their
employees
every
time
they need it.
Therefore
, even if they are on holiday or after
work
hours. Some people believe
this
is a positive thing to implement and other see it as negative if the
companies
develop that way of approaching their
employees
.
This
essay will discuss the positive and negative points of view to develop these in the
companies
. First of all, good communication is key to having good relationships in the
work
environment.
Moreover
, if we are able to
contact
our employers all the
time
we know the things happening in the company and if something urgent happens they are able to
contact
us as well.
For example
, in Japan
companies
already have
this
point of view and they are able to call or email their
employees
every
time
they need even if they already finish
work
which creates a good connection between employer and employee.
On the other hand
, Leisure
time
and well being of their staff should be a priority by the employers because their
employees
will have a good mind
while
they are working and they will
work
better. As well they will have good productivity.
In addition
, to ,prevent employee sickness should be important to consider their well-being outside of
work
so they should consider a
time
of not contacting the staff only in urgent situations.
For instance
, in Denmark one of the happiest countries in the world employers
high
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value the holidays and leisure
time
of their workers, so they have reduced the level of sickness by 20% per cent because of that. In conclusion, some
companies
are changing the way to approach the free
time
of their workers thinking they are able to
contact
them all the
time
even on holiday.
Nevertheless
,
this
way of approach has
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positive and negative
point
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points
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of view.In my opinion,
companies
shouldn't
contact
employees
in their
time
outside of
work
.
Companies
should value the worker's
time
and respect their leisure
time
outside of
work
with no
contact
with them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • 1. Productivity
  • 2. Urgent matters
  • 3. Prevent potential crises
  • 4. Impact the business
  • 5. Sense of responsibility
  • 6. Dedication
  • 7. Operations
  • 8. Decision-making processes
  • 9. Accessible
  • 10. Flexible work schedule
  • 11. Remote work
  • 12. Work-life balance
  • 13. Availability
  • 14. Employee burnout
  • 15. Stress
  • 16. Mental and physical health
  • 17. Job satisfaction
  • 18. Blur the lines
  • 19. Personal and professional life
  • 20. Disconnect
  • 21. Resentment
  • 22. Morale
  • 23. Valued
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