The chart below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.
The pie charts illustrate how many international
languages
British Use synonyms
students
at a particular university in the United Kingdom which has the ability to communicate with native speakers between 2000 and 2010.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
students
who are able to speak Spanish is the highest Use synonyms
rate
between 2000 and 2010. Use synonyms
Moreover
, from 2000 to 2010, there has a similar the lowest Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
students
who can speak others language is German.
Regarding 2000, the Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
students
who are able to speak Spanish is the highest Use synonyms
rate
which is 30%. Use synonyms
Secondly
, there have Linking Words
students
who cannot speak other Use synonyms
languages
about 20%, Use synonyms
while
there has the same Linking Words
rate
in terms of Use synonyms
students
who can speak French and another language at 15%. Use synonyms
Likewise
, the Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
students
who have the ability to communicate in German and two other Use synonyms
languages
at a similar Use synonyms
rate
is 10%.
Turning to 2010, the Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
students
who are able to speak Spanish is the highest Use synonyms
rate
which is 35% much more than the year 2000 by 5%. Meanwhile, there is the same Use synonyms
percentage
which is 10% in terms of Use synonyms
students
' abilities to speak German and French and cannot speak other Use synonyms
languages
without English. Use synonyms
Finally
, in other Linking Words
languages
, the second majority that Use synonyms
students
speak in 2010 another language (20%).Use synonyms
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