The chart below show information about animals and rainfall at the Nboro Nature reserve .Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below show  information about animals and rainfall at the Nboro Nature reserve .Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The
two
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bar graphs provide information about the
number
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of
two
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different
animals
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namely;
Zebras
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and
Buffalos
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and the
amount
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of rainfall, in Nboro Nature Reserve, in four different years (2005, 2007, 2009 and 2011). Generally speaking, the
two
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charts indicate that there was a clear positive relation between the
number
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of
animals
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and the
amount
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of
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rain
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rainfall
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fall
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in the reserve. And by end of the
period
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both the
number
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of
the
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apply
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animals
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and the
amount
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of
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rain
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rainfall
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fall
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increased. To start with, in 2005, the
number
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of
zebras
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in Nboro reserve was nearly 50
zebras
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, and almost 40
buffalos
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, meanwhile the
amount
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of
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rain
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rainfall
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fall
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was well over 600
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millimeters
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.
Two
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years later, in 2007, the rate of
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rain
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rainfall
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fall
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rose roughly to 1100
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millimeters
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;
similarly
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, the
number
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of both
animals
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rose noticeably to about 70
zebras
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and just over 80
buffalos
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.
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, the picture in 2009 is slightly different, the
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rain
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rainfall
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fall
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dropped to nearly 650
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millimeters
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, and so did the
number
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of
zebras
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to just fewer than 70, but the
number
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of
buffalos
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continued to rise to well over 115. Moving on to 2011, which shows peak time for all categories; rainfall hit the highest at almost 1200
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millimeters
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, and the
number
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of
zebras
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increased to well over 82 and just under 120
buffalos
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.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words two, number, animals, zebras, buffalos, amount, rain, fall, millimeters with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 8 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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