The diagrams below show the floor plans for a trade conference in 2009 and the same conference in 2010

The diagrams below show the floor plans for a trade conference in 2009 and the same conference in 2010
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The maps illustrate changes that took place at the trade
conference
from 2009 to 2010.
Overall
, the
conference
underwent a number of dramatic changes, the most important of which are the expansion and relocation of the
conference
hall and
exhibition
area
. The balcony in the east of the
conference
was added lounge
area
for consumers in 2010. There used to be a registration right next to the balcony, but it was
then
expensed and shifted to the refreshments
area
, which is between the side and the main entrance. One of the most noticeable changes is that a
conference
hall was constructed in the southeast of the trade
conference
, replacing the
exhibition
area
there, came
along with
more seats provided. The
exhibition
area
was moved to the left side of the
conference
which faced the main entrance. It is
also
important to note that the southward expansion of the
exhibition
area
came
at
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the disappearance of a meeting room and two empty rooms.
Subsequently
, more display stands were added.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words conference, exhibition, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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