Write about the following topic: It is believed that there is a negative impact of tourism on tourist spots which is majorly due to the behaviour of people who visit there. Why do you think that people behave badly when they visit some places? What measures can be taken to resolve this issue? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

İt is undeniable that many countries are providing and stabilizing their economic growth through

tourism

policy

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policies

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. During the visiting

period

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the

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visitors and tourists sometimes act unconsciously in

touristic

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tourist

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places

,

as a

result

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valuable amenities and

also

monuments are damaged by people. I intend to delve into the cons of

tourism

policy and will introduce measurements in

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the following

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paragraphs. To start with,

possibilities

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the possibilities

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of travelling

touristics

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tourist

places

in the whole

seasons

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season

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and visiting from all over the world to these

places

are extremely significant for increasing

of

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tourism

. Preserving particular

places

where

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that

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are situated in the area of

tourism

is

responsible

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the responsible

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of

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the government office. During the

travelling

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the

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visitors generally prefer to take pictures

in

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of

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the outside or inside of ancient forecasts,

buildings

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and buildings

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. In these cases, some people enter

to

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forbidden areas or

places

for recording videos. Under 16 ages group of children draw pictures on the wall of towers or when they touch the ancient pictures or items, sometimes

ones

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blow out them on the floor. In fact, The government has to implement strict

regulation

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regulations

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preserving

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to preserve

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this

type of accident. For

examle

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example

, when

touristic

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tourist

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exhibitions are arranged by the

adminstrations

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administrations

administration

, they have to apply certain age

restriction

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restrictions

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.

Furthermore

, the

touristic

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tourist

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guides would warn

to

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all

of

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participants

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the participants

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about the possible menaces to the whole amenities twice before entering

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the tourism

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tourism

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tourist

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area. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that if some measurements are applied to

tourism

policy in which aforementioned, the strict regulations affect

on

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the attitudes of the visitors.