robot teacher Some people feel that with the rise of artificial intelligence, computers and robots will take over the roles of teachers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays, with the development of artificial intelligence, whether
robots
will take over the
roles
of
teachers
has attracted numerous controversies and drawn
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of the public. Some people hold the view that
robots
will take over the
roles
of
teachers
,
while
others do not think so. In my eyes,
robots
will not take over the
roles
of
teachers
.
Firstly
,
teacher
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plays
a
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multiple
role
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in the school.
For instance
,
teachers
not only offer the
lession
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lesson
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but
also
communicate with students. In
comparasion
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comparison
,
robots
can not do the latter part.
As a result
, I reckon
robots
will not take over the
roles
of
teachers
.
Moreover
,
robots
can not be flexible.
For example
,
robots
are set by
human
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.
Similarly
, they can not adapt them to different students. Undoubtedly, I think
robots
will not take over the
roles
of
teachers
.
To sum up
,
teachers
do various jobs in their
career
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,
while
robots
might only follow the simple process.
Therefore
, I figure
robots
will not take over the
roles
of
teachers
.
Furthermore
, it is predicted that
teachers
will
continue
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play a vital part
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education.
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