The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram illustrates a few steps on how is
glass
recycled.
Firstly
, the consumer will buy a product such
as:
a Remove the comma
apply
glass
bottle, then
he or she will drink the bottle ending up throwing it away or putting it in a recycle bin. Secondly
, after throwing the bottle into the recycle bin, the workers of a company that is
responsible for recycling will send the items to a treatment plant. Then
the process of washing and sterilising the item
begins with a machine that is
responsible for cleaning products. In addition
, there is a crushing and melting machine that comes after the sterilising process to crush or melt any item
. Lastly
, after the item
is crushed the residue goes to the moulding machine to fill up the containers forming a new product.
Overall
, this
process is called recycling and it can work for any plastic or glass
item
to produce eco-friendly glass
bottles and products.Submitted by dialamustafaalwais on
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