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Task 1. The picture below shows the differences in the layout of the conference centre

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The diagrams illustrate the conference layout in 2010 and how it will change in 2025.
Overall
, the
centre
 will undergo a number of dramatic changes, the most important of which are the development of some more
rooms
 and the expansion of the parking lot. In the northwest of the conference, two
rooms
 will remain unchanged,
while
 an IT
centre
 and a canteen with a kitchen will be constructed in the southwest, replacing most of the open space there. The expense of the garden in the middle of the conference
centre
 will come
at
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 the addition of two meeting
rooms
, a game room and
music
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 room. The reception area and the hall in the north of the garden will stay the same. There used to be an extra garden in the east, but it will
then
 be redeveloped into a residence hall with 20
rooms
. The parking space will be enlarged and moved to the southeast of the
centre
.
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