You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
#minutes #results #survey #people #four #tourist #attraction #britain #year #summarise #information #features #comparisons
The pie chart illustrates the proportion of
sightseers
who attended four famous tourist spots in the United Kingdom in 1999.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the majority of Linking Words
sightseers
preferred to visit Use synonyms
theme
Use synonyms
parks
, Use synonyms
while
wildlife Linking Words
parks
and zoos were the least favourable attractions for Use synonyms
sightseers
. The number of visitors who visited the museums and galleries was just slightly lesser than those at the Use synonyms
theme
Use synonyms
parks
, followed by the historic houses and monuments.
Looking at the details, Use synonyms
theme
Use synonyms
parks
top the list with 38 per Use synonyms
cent
of visitors recorded mainly because it consists of five attractions. The Blackpool pleasure beach was the most popular spot in the Use synonyms
theme
park with 47 per Use synonyms
cent
of visitors visiting there, followed by the Alton Towers (17%) and the Pleasureland at Southport (16%). The Chessington World of Adventures and the Legoland at Windsor both attracted the same amount of Use synonyms
sightseers
, accounting for 10 per Use synonyms
cent
each.
The wildlife Use synonyms
parks
and zoos were the least common places for travellers to visit, with only 9 per Use synonyms
cent
of the travellers recorded. The museums and galleries were the second most popular place to visit, with 37 per Use synonyms
cent
of the visitor visiting, followed by the historic houses and monuments (16%) being the third most popular attractions for the visitor.Use synonyms
Submitted by joewingpun1992 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words sightseers, theme, parks, cent with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
▼