The diagram below shows the stages involved in producing one bottle of wine.

The diagram provides information about the process of producing wine.

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, wine-making undergoes eight stages, from grape harvesting, and selling to the supermarket. It takes 400 grapes to produce a single bottle, and waste is produced in three phases of

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process.

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with, grapes are picked for juicing. 400 ripe grapes are mechanically squeezed to produce 3000ml,

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the remaining unwanted parts are thrown for compost.

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, the liquid is sent and kept in a cylindrical container for fermentation for two weeks. The fermented liquid will experience a hydraulic press, and the collected waste will again be composted. The liquid is reduced to 1000ml.

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, the liquid will be thoroughly filtered, and the residual waste to composting, afterwards the liquid will be placed in wooden barrels for storage. The juice needs to be aged for a period of time. In total, roughly 750ml is being produced for a single bottle of wine.

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, once bottled, the wine is ready for delivery to the supermarket for sale.

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