Some people think that young children need to attend nursery before primary school. While others believe young children can spend all day at home. Duscuss both views and give your opinion.

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that the younger ones should attend primary

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directly

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of attending primary first and some are of the

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opposite

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. In the following ,paragraphs I will discuss both views

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my opinion. First and foremost, schooling is an important part of

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's life and attending the same from a young age i.e. starting from nursery and going up to the primary classes plays a vital role in developing a kid's future and his way of thinking and expressing his ideas in the society.

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, a person who is going to an institution and attending kindergarten lectures will be more innovative and learned than the

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who straightforward forward stepping to the primary class at a later age.

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, a child who is in his younger days grabs knowledge more speedily

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the personality of the

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learning at an early stage will definitely be better than the other. On the other side, some individuals are of the

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that sending a child directly to his primary

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is more beneficial to his growth and proper early childhood care can be provided to him by his parents at home.

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, a baby spends the pre-primary days of his life in the hands of his parents who provide him with the best of everything which will enhance his knowledge when going to

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at the primary level.

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growth of

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will be better than the

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having the pressure of completing things on time.

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, I would say that providing the facility of

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to

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parents and the way they want to bring up their child looking upon his best interests.