The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1
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The table above represents the statistical differences in international travel between 1990 and 2005 across five geographical regions- Europe, the Middle East,
America
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, Africa, Asia and the Pacific. The overarching trend is that the overseas travelling population has gradually increased from 1990 to 2005.
This
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is evinced in the first row of the table where the data of 448.9 million recorded in 1990 jumps to 693.7 million by 2005. Zooming into each geographical location separately, it is salient that Europe has the highest number of travellers for every year that has been recorded. Interestingly, it
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experiences the largest change in the voyaging community from 1990 to 2005 .
Conversely
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, the Middle East region recorded the lowest figure of overseas travellers each year, with its international travelling population undergoing the lowest increment too. For the remaining regions, we notice that all
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America
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harbour
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a growing globetrotting community.
America
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's international travellers,
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, steadily increase only until 2000 post when the numbers drop between 2000 and 2005.
To sum up
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, all regions except
America
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have experienced an increment in the statistical record of voyagers every year between 1990 and 2005.
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Europe and the Middle East have showcased the largest and lowest record respectively, other regions' data falls in between, incrementing differently.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words america with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • International travel
  • Million
  • Trend
  • Gradual rise
  • Significant jump
  • Technological advancements
  • Increased affluence
  • Globalization
  • Rate of increase
  • Low-cost airlines
  • Ease of travel
  • Tourism promotion
  • Regional differences
  • Cultural exchange
  • Economic impact
  • Environmental concerns
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