Question: The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarise the information by selecting a reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
bar chart compares the amount of time that people in Great Britain used different types of phone lines to make calls between 1995 and 2002.
Overall
, it can be noted that throughout the entire period
under study
the fixed line for local calls was the most used, followed by the same type of phone line utilized for national and international calls. Add a comma
,study
Although
the category of mobile phones accounted for the lowest total number of minutes
in the given time period
, it is obvious that this
segment of the telephone market experienced an exponential increase over time.
Further
analysis of the data reveals that British people increasingly used their fixed lines to make local calls in the first years of the period
, reaching a peak of about 90 billion
minutes
in 1999. However
, from the year 2000 on, this
category gradually became less popular, dropping to just above 70 billion
minutes
in 2002. The number of minutes
spent on landlines for national and international calls slowly rose each year, although
the incline was rather modest with a figure of nearly 40 billion
minutes
in 1995 to slightly over 60 billlion
seven years later. Mobile phone usage almost tripled between 1999 and 2002, standing at approximately 45 Correct your spelling
billion
billion
minutes
in the final year of the period
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