Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobs – need to feel challenged and also wanted more benefits describe your new job – whole new experience / I have never worked on it before / love it tell him/her your other news – next month I’ll travel to Europe

#friend #jobs #job #love #news #month #i’ll #travel #europe

Dear Anju, I hope you and your family are doing well. It's been a

while

since we had

last

meet. I'm happy to let you know that I have

finally

switched my job to a new company. As you know I have worked in my past job for 3 years and later I wanted to change my role, but there was a limited opportunity there. So, I decided to find myself a new profession.

Additionally

, my new job comes with lots of incentives.

Moreover

, I get to learn new technology and new products.

Furthermore

, I always wanted to work in a product base company and it seems my dream came true.

In addition

, I am planning to visit Europe next month for some office work. I hope to meet you and get some good places to visit. I think you will be free during the time so that we can make the most of the trip. Your's loving, Ranjan

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

159 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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