Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
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although
some think that increasing the
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amenities are the best for Change the noun form
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health
, others, myself included, believe that other measures are needed.
The first reason is about avoiding fast food and having healthy meals because people
are living in a fast world and they prefer to have a quick meal which is prepared in a
shortest time of a day. Change the article
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instead
they prefer to go to street foods which are harmful for
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. So, fast food which Add an article
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health
public. Moreover
, the second one would be about health
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also
communicate with others on different platforms. For example
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health
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advertising a post on that surface. Correct article usage
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Hence
, increasing the health
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people
with social media is another measurement.
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health
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facilities because they think that Change the noun form
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people
by seeing this
stuff around their area are going to change their behaviour and make them to
do Change the verb form
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sport
for their body and also
they think that, sport
facilities can make an area for Change the noun form
sports
people
to meet others. However
, when someone cares about its
own body might Correct pronoun usage
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his
her
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up for a gym and Correct your spelling
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they
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motivation to see Change the article
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things
Furthermore
, there are a lot of places such
as malls, gardens and so on to communicate and find a friend, when people
are among
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sport
facilities, they need to focus on their Change the noun form
sports
work out
.
In conclusion, improving Correct your spelling
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the
public Correct article usage
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heath
has two topics which I agree Correct your spelling
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the fact that for increasing public Change preposition
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Other measures are required. For two reason
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