Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.

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some think that increasing

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sport

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amenities are the best for

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public

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, others, myself included, believe that other measures are needed. The first reason is about avoiding fast food and having healthy meals because

people

are living in a fast world and they prefer to have a quick meal which is prepared in

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shortest time of a day.

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no time to make

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dinner or lunch

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they prefer to go to street foods which are harmful

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body

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. So, fast food which

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oil can decrease

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health

public.

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advertisement

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humans are involved with technology currently

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communicate with others on different platforms.

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down Instagram or

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can inform about

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details by

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advertising a post on that surface.

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health

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knowledge

people

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with social media is another measurement. Some may argue that

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good way to

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public

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sport

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facilities because they think that

people

by seeing

this

stuff around their area are going to change their behaviour and make them

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do

sport

for their body and

also

they think that,

sport

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facilities can make an area for

people

to meet others.

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own body might

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up for a gym and

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may not need

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motivation to see

sport

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tings

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.

Furthermore

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as malls, gardens and so on to communicate and find a friend, when

people

are

among

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sport

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facilities, they need to focus on their

work out

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. In conclusion, improving

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public

heath

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has two topics which I agree

to

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the fact that for increasing public

health

Other measures are required. For two

reason

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, the one is about healthy meals and avoiding fast food and the other is about adverting to motivate

people

.