The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.
The line graph compares figures for daily travel by
people
in the Uk using three different forms of transport from 1970 to 2030.
Overall
, the
car
is by far the most popular means of transport for
people
in the UK throughout the period shown.
Also
, the
number
of
people
using
car
and train increase gradually,
while
the
number
of bus
users
falls steadily. In 1970, around 5
million
UK commuters [travelled = went by = commuted by]
car
on a daily basis,
while
the bus and train were used by about 4
million
and 2
million
people
respectively. In the year 2000, the
number
of
people
driving to work rose to 7
million
and the
number
of commuting rail passengers climbed to 3
million
.
However
, there was a small drop in the
number
of bus
users
. By 2030, the
number
of
people
who commute by
car
is expected to increase to almost 9
million
, and the
number
of train
users
is
also
predicted to rise, to nearly 5
million
.
By contrast
, buses are likely to become a less popular choice, with only 3
million
daily
users
.
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