The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
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The graph shows
energy
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use in the United States of America from 1980 to 2008 and predictions
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2030. From 1980 to 2008 the most important figure (Petrol and Oil) increased slightly (by 10%). The graph for consumption of coal and natural gas is almost similar (they grew by almost 5%). The less popular sources of
energy
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like nuclear
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, solar/wind
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and hydropower started from one point and in 2008 the point
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approximately the same .Consumption of nuclear
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and solar/wind
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grew by almost 3 and 2 per cent respectively, but consumption of hydropower did not change. The projections from 2008 to 1930 show that petrol and oil will grew by the same per cent as in the previous 28 years . Coal and Natural Gas will start from one point, but their outcome indicators will be different. 32 and 24 per cent respectively. Nuclear and solar/ wind
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indicators will not change at all till 2025. From 2025 to 2030 they will increase steadily by almost 3%. And the most unpopular one has not changed . It can be concluded that the most popular source of
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has not changed its position. In the
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the second and third place occupied Coal and Natural Gas respectively , so in the end they exchanged their positions. The fourth, fifth and sixth occupied nuclear, solar and hydropower
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respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Energy consumption
  • Renewable resources
  • Non-renewable resources
  • Fossil fuels
  • Nuclear power
  • Hydroelectric power
  • Solar energy
  • Wind energy
  • Biomass
  • Consumption patterns
  • Technological advancements
  • Energy efficiency
  • Sustainable development
  • Carbon footprint
  • Energy policy
  • Projections
  • Decade
  • Significant shifts
  • Economic factors
  • Environmental impact
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