The given line chart illustrates the number of people in the UK commuting daily by three different vehicles from 1970 to 2030.
The given line chart illustrates the
number
of people in the UK commuting daily by three different vehicles from 1970 to 2030.
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Overall
, Linking Words
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car
remains the most favoured mean of commuting transportation in the UK. The figures for Add an article
the car
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car
and Fix the agreement mistake
cars
train
increase significantly in the period Fix the agreement mistake
trains
while
the opposite was true with Linking Words
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the bus
a bus
bus
.
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buses
To begin
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with
1970, 5 Change preposition
in
million
UK citizens commuted by Use synonyms
car
, followed by the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
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bus
and train users with 4 Change to a plural noun
buses
million
and 2 Use synonyms
million
respectively. A considerable growth to 7 Use synonyms
million
was witnessed in the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
car
drivers Use synonyms
while
the figure for Linking Words
train
rose substantially to 3 Fix the agreement mistake
trains
million
in 2000. Use synonyms
By contrast
, there was a gradual decline to 3.5 Linking Words
million
in the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
bus
commuters in 2000.
Predictions express that the Use synonyms
number
of those who drive cars to commute will reach a peak at 9 Use synonyms
million
in 2030. It is forecasted that the figure for rail passengers will climb by 2 Use synonyms
million
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while
that of Linking Words
bus
users is expected to be less popular at 3 Use synonyms
million
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