The given line chart illustrates the number of people in the UK commuting daily by three different vehicles from 1970 to 2030.

The given line chart illustrates the number of people in the UK commuting daily by three different vehicles from 1970 to 2030.
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The given line chart illustrates the
number
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of people in the UK commuting daily by three different vehicles from 1970 to 2030.
Overall
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,
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car
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the car
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remains the most favoured mean of commuting transportation in the UK. The figures for
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car
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cars
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and
train
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trains
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increase significantly in the period
while
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the opposite was true with
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the bus
a bus
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bus
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buses
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.
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with
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in
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1970, 5
million
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UK citizens commuted by
car
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, followed by the
number
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of
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bus
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buses
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and train users with 4
million
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and 2
million
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respectively. A considerable growth to 7
million
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was witnessed in the
number
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of
car
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drivers
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the figure for
train
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trains
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rose substantially to 3
million
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in 2000.
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, there was a gradual decline to 3.5
million
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in the
number
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of
bus
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commuters in 2000. Predictions express that the
number
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of those who drive cars to commute will reach a peak at 9
million
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in 2030. It is forecasted that the figure for rail passengers will climb by 2
million
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while
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that of
bus
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users is expected to be less popular at 3
million
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, car, bus, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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