The given line chart illustrates the number of people in the UK commuting daily by three different vehicles from 1970 to 2030.
The given line chart illustrates the
number
of people in the UK commuting daily by three different vehicles from 1970 to 2030.
Overall
, car
remains the most favoured mean of commuting transportation in the UK. The figures for Add an article
the car
car
and Fix the agreement mistake
cars
train
increase significantly in the period Fix the agreement mistake
trains
while
the opposite was true with Add an article
the bus
a bus
bus
.
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buses
To begin
with
1970, 5 Change preposition
in
million
UK citizens commuted by car
, followed by the number
of bus
and train users with 4 Change to a plural noun
buses
million
and 2 million
respectively. A considerable growth to 7 million
was witnessed in the number
of car
drivers while
the figure for train
rose substantially to 3 Fix the agreement mistake
trains
million
in 2000. By contrast
, there was a gradual decline to 3.5 million
in the number
of bus
commuters in 2000.
Predictions express that the number
of those who drive cars to commute will reach a peak at 9 million
in 2030. It is forecasted that the figure for rail passengers will climb by 2 million
while
that of bus
users is expected to be less popular at 3 million
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