Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?

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many

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are obliged to pursue a job that they hate or they are not capable to do. The economic system in many countries gives

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opportunities for

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to find a

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career

that they enjoy. Citizens are often forced to pursue a

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career

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offered to them

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a precise moment especially

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of economic necessity.

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, workers are afraid to leave a stable job that they do not like because

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could result in not finding another one.

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results in

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of motivation among workers ,

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in less productivity in spite of the

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profit. In

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people

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are not satisfied with their existence, since working is one of the fundamental tasks that a human has during his life. Workers could

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psychological

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as depression or anxiety. Affecting not only them but

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their loved ones and their working environment. My

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has thought me the mental struggle that a person can

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doing something that you hate.

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, during my high school

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had to work as a teacher for many weeks. During that time my mental health drooped as

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was feeling like

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was losing my time

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doing an activity that

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really did not

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many

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can’t choose

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prefers

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type

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carreer

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career

because of disparities in the economic systems.

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why it is important to create more work opportunities

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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241 words

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work-life balance
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self-esteem
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Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?

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Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Every year large numbers of people migrate from one country to another for different reasons. Discuss the advantages of migration for the individual and for society as a whole.

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«Some modern artists receive huge sums of money for the things they create, while others struggle to survive. Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation» To what extent do you agree or disagree?

some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe that they should be free to work in another country if they wish. discuss both views and give your own opinion.