You have recently flown to another country on a business trip. You were satisfied with flight , but didn’t like services at the airport. Write a letter to the airport manager and say Give your flight details Why were you disappointed Suggest some improvements to the airport services

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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to express my dissatisfaction with the services received at the airport. I took the flight from Ahmedabad to London with booking number AB123 on date 28th January

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year. The flight took off at 9:30 AM local time and landed at the airport in London at 6:30 PM local time.

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, I was disappointed when I found that the check-in machines were not working properly and I had to stay in queue for almost an hour to get my boarding pass.

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, baggage check-in process took almost two hours, which is very pathetic and highly unprofessional.

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made me feel tired and exhausted throught my flight and was not able to enjoy the travel.

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, I request you ensure that check-in machines are working properly and some additional back-up machines are available.

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to that, you could set up a mechanism to speed the process of baggage processing. These would help travellers to not get tired because of unnecessary chaos. I hope you would consider my suggestions. Yours faithfully, Kishan

kishanpatel2550Sun Mar 26 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

179 words

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