You have recently flown to another country on a business trip. You were satisfied with flight , but didn’t like services at the airport. Write a letter to the airport manager and say Give your flight details Why were you disappointed Suggest some improvements to the airport services

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Dear Sir o Madam, I am writing

this

letter to address you

due to

have

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had an annoyed moment with the San Juan Airport when I arrived

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Argentina.

Firstly

, my name is Javier Cabrera, I took the flight from Miami to Buenos Aires. Fortunately, the travel by plane was amazing, the food tasted awesome and we even came on time.

Then

, I had

serious

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issue with my luggage owing to I could not find it.

Therefore

, I asked

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the

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reception where I had to make the complaint before

to call

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the insurance,

Nonetheless

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the treatment

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the receptionist was terrible, he said

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that it was my fault to lose it, and they weren't able to recover my personal things. It was the first time in my life that I had an

argue

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with the staff of

this

airport. I had taken many flights previously and I never had a problem with anybody. I really felt mad and angry because I am a customer, I always treat with respect to the employees of the company

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with.

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Besides

, I would like to give you some suggestions. I believe that would be appropriate that the

personal

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needs to be evaluated as soon as possible

thus

heart

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that many people had problems with the services

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the airport.

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, you should include a number where you can call

cab

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or an Uber

due to

is impossible to take on outside the establishment. I will be expecting your reply

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eagerly

eagarly

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eagerly

Javier Cabrera

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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9Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

252 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You have recently flown to another country on a business trip. You were satisfied with flight , but didn’t like services at the airport. Write a letter to the airport manager and say Give your flight details Why were you disappointed Suggest some improvements to the airport services

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