You have recently flown to another country on a business trip. You were satisfied with flight , but didn’t like services at the airport. Write a letter to the airport manager and say Give your flight details Why were you disappointed Suggest some improvements to the airport services
Dear Sir o Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to address you due to
I have
had an annoyed moment with the San Juan Airport when I arrived Unnecessary verb
apply
to
Argentina.
Change preposition
in
Firstly
, my name is Javier Cabrera, I took the flight from Miami to Buenos Aires. Fortunately, the travel by plane was amazing, the food tasted awesome and we even came on time. Then
, I had serious
issue with my luggage owing to I could not find it. Add an article
a serious
Therefore
, I asked at
Change preposition
apply
the
reception where I had to make the complaint before Correct article usage
apply
to call
the insurance, Change the verb form
calling
Nonetheless
the treatment Add a comma
,Nonetheless
of
the receptionist was terrible, he said Change preposition
from
me
that it was my fault to lose it, and they weren't able to recover my personal things.
It was the first time in my life that I had an Change preposition
to me
argue
with the staff of Replace the word
argument
this
airport. I had taken many flights previously and I never had a problem with anybody. I really felt mad and angry because I am a customer, I always treat with respect to the employees of the company.
Change preposition
with.
Besides
, I would like to give you some suggestions. I believe that would be appropriate that the personal
needs to be evaluated as soon as possible Replace the word
person
thus
I heart
that many people had problems with the services Correct your spelling
heard
in
the airport. Change preposition
at
In addition
, you should include a number where you can call cab
or an Uber Add an article
a cab
due to
is impossible to take on outside the establishment.
I will be expecting your reply Correct your spelling
eagerly
eagarly
Javier CabreraCorrect your spelling
eagerly
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The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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