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You have recently flown to another country on a business trip. You were satisfied with flight , but didn’t like services at the airport. Write a letter to the airport manager and say Give your flight details Why were you disappointed Suggest some improvements to the airport services

#country #business #trip #flight #didn’t #services #airport #manager #improvements
Dear Sir o Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to address you
due to
 I
have
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had an annoyed moment with the San Juan Airport when I arrived
to
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 Argentina.
Firstly
, my name is Javier Cabrera, I took the flight from Miami to Buenos Aires. Fortunately, the travel by plane was amazing, the food tasted awesome and we even came on time.
Then
, I had
serious
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 issue with my luggage owing to I could not find it.
Therefore
, I asked
at
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the
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reception where I had to make the complaint before
to call
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 the insurance,
Nonetheless
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 the treatment
of
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from
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 the receptionist was terrible, he said
me
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 that it was my fault to lose it, and they weren't able to recover my personal things. It was the first time in my life that I had an
argue
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 with the staff of
this
 airport. I had taken many flights previously and I never had a problem with anybody. I really felt mad and angry because I am a customer, I always treat with respect to the employees of the company
.
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Besides
, I would like to give you some suggestions. I believe that would be appropriate that the
personal
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 needs to be evaluated as soon as possible
thus
 I
heart
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heard
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 that many people had problems with the services
in
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at
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 the airport.
In addition
, you should include a number where you can call
cab
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a cab
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 or an Uber
due to
 is impossible to take on outside the establishment. I will be expecting your reply
Correct your spelling
eagerly
eagarly
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eagerly
 Javier Cabrera
Submitted by javiiercabrera on

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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