You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The line graph illustrates the average number of
British
travelling to work using three common transportations, the car, bus, and train, from 1970 to 2030.
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Overall
, there was more Linking Words
British
used car and train for commuting over the period of 1970 - 2020, Use synonyms
while
the number of Linking Words
British
using a bus for commuting declined for the same period. The figure Use synonyms
further
predicts the number of Linking Words
British
who will be using these transportation services in 2030, which shows a similar trend.
Looking at the details, using a car to commute was the most favourable option for the Use synonyms
British
in 1970, followed by bus and train, accounting for 5 Use synonyms
million
, 4 Use synonyms
million
, and 2.5 Use synonyms
million
, respectively. The usage of these three transportations remains stable until 1980. The usage of Use synonyms
cars
began to rise gradually from 5 Use synonyms
million
in 1980 to 7 Use synonyms
million
in 2000. The Use synonyms
use
of Use synonyms
trains
followed a similar trend but had a less obvious increase from 2 Use synonyms
million
in 1980 to 3 Use synonyms
million
in 2000. Use synonyms
Conversely
, the usage of buses followed a downward trend, which fluctuated between 3 to 4 Linking Words
million
from 1980 to 2020.
Despite the Use synonyms
use
of Use synonyms
cars
and Use synonyms
trains
remaining constant from 2000 to 2010, they both experienced a significant rise from 2010 to 2020, ending at 7.5 Use synonyms
million
for Use synonyms
cars
and 4 Use synonyms
million
for Use synonyms
trains
, respectively. Use synonyms
While
the Linking Words
use
of buses declined gradually from 4 Use synonyms
million
in 2000 to just above 3 Use synonyms
million
in 2020.
In 2030, it is predicted that the Use synonyms
use
of Use synonyms
cars
and Use synonyms
trains
will continue to rise with 9 Use synonyms
million
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British
using Use synonyms
cars
to commute and around 5 Use synonyms
million
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British
using Use synonyms
trains
to commute. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the Linking Words
use
of buses will decline to 3 Use synonyms
million
in the same year.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words british, million, cars, use, trains with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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