In some countries, even though the rates of serious crimes are decreasing, people feel less safe than ever before. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?
In some nations, despite declining rates of dangerous
crimes
, people
tend to feel less secure compared to the past. The most obvious causes are previously committed crimes
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such
scenes on news
can make people
feel less safe, and the most viable solutions are more safety measures in place and detailed
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Sometimes, previously committed crimes
can make people
feel less protected. This
is because they still have memories of horrible crimes
in their minds and
make them feel frightened. Correct word choice
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, they find it difficult to trust anyone and feel less secure in strengers’
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In addition
, watching detailed descriptions of any dangerous crimes
on television can have a destructive effect on people
’s mental health. In other words
, a negative visualization of such
crimes
can result in crime happening in people
’s heads and making them feel less safe. For example
, 1 in every 30 adults in the UK feel
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news
of serious crimes
on television, and not wanting to go out.
A possible solution to this
issue is to put more safety measures in place in order for people
to feel safe. This
gives them a sense of security and a way to seek help if in any danger. Another possible solution is a ban on a detailed description
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descriptions
crimes
on television. This
will help people
keep away from a
negative visualisation and their damaging effects on their mental health to make them feel unsafe. Remove the article
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For example
, recently in India a show called ‘crime patrol’ was prohibited on news
channels because it had a negative psychological impact on people
after watching it.
In conclusion, previously committed crimes
and detailed news
on any serious crimes
can lead to people
feeling less safe. However
, this
can simply be prevented by putting extra safety measures in place and compelling news
channels to stop showing comprehensive details of dangerous crimes
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