In some countries, even though the rates of serious crimes are decreasing, people feel less safe than ever before. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?

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In some nations, despite declining rates of dangerous
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people
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tend to feel less secure compared to the past. The most obvious causes are previously committed
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and detailed
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scenes on
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can make
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feel less safe, and the most viable solutions are more safety measures in place and
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of any serious
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be banned on
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channels. Sometimes, previously committed
crimes
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can make
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feel less protected.
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is because they still have memories of horrible
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in their minds
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which
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make them feel frightened.
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, they find it difficult to trust anyone and feel less secure in
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strangers
presence.
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, watching detailed descriptions of any dangerous
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on television can have a destructive effect on
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’s mental health.
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, a negative visualization of
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crimes
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can result in crime happening in
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’s heads and making them feel less safe.
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, 1 in every 30 adults in the UK
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frightened after watching detailed
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of serious
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on television, and not wanting to go out. A possible solution to
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issue is to put more safety measures in place in order for
people
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to feel safe.
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gives them a sense of security and a way to seek help if in any danger. Another possible solution is a ban on a detailed
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descriptions
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of any serious
crimes
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on television.
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will help
people
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keep away from
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negative visualisation and their damaging effects on their mental health to make them feel unsafe.
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, recently in India a show called ‘crime patrol’ was prohibited on
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channels because it had a negative psychological impact on
people
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after watching it. In conclusion, previously committed
crimes
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and detailed
news
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on any serious
crimes
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can lead to
people
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feeling less safe.
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,
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can simply be prevented by putting extra safety measures in place and compelling
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channels to stop showing comprehensive details of dangerous
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • availability heuristic
  • media coverage
  • misinformation
  • urbanization
  • community cohesion
  • justice system
  • economic inequality
  • community policing
  • media literacy
  • surveillance
  • swift justice
  • social cohesion
  • neighborhood watch
  • deterrent
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